STUDENT WORK:
What You're Doing To Me, by Hannah Rockcliffe
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Comments (2)
Added by Richard Thomas on 17th May 2010 at 5:00pm
Very simple comment... This is a really strong pop song. Well done!
Added by David Watkins on 14th Mar 2008 at 3:18pm
I thought the song has a strong hook, i.e. do you know what you're doin to me. And up until the piano interlude there's quite strong material. But I feel there could have been something a bit more interesting after this piano solo part. Rather than just repeating "do you know what you're doing to me". I.e. Some gradual harmonies one part commin in at a time and then a variation on do you know what your doin to me. Or perhaps a repeat of the earlier material. I.e. But now your just arrigant. (Or something). Also the piano break was a bit boring at times. Dave
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